domingo, 31 de marzo de 2013

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Hello, my name is Carlos Navarrete, I am student of geography at the "Universidad de Chile", I have 21 years and live in San Miguel, Santiago. I come to another city, the name is Ranchi, which is south of Santiago.

This city is known for being a mining town and is really quiet, but every day it becomes more urbanized imitating santiago.

I really love listening to music, especially rock but with different styles, because I am a musician and I think it serves to improve. I also like video games, I think I'm addicted to them, forgetting all thanks to video games.

I also enjoy spending time with my friends, where we laugh at jokes while drinking beer, or on occasions when we play football, which is a sport that many of us enjoy.

I am a really fan of football, I love his sport, I watching many leagues of football in the T.V., my favorite club  is "Colo-colo", is the most important and winning club in Chile. But in this days is a bad team, I hope they improve.

I think I am a nice person, a funny guy and comprensive. I have a good relation with my friends, but sometimes a really angry person but I try to improve.

If something happened I dislike is little time with my girlfriend, who long for, she lives in Rancagua and studies I can not see it very often.


I wish you peace and rock and roll.
Good bye people.

5 comentarios:

  1. Hi Carlos your life is very interesting, especially that you were not born in Santiago and your passion for music.
    I will continue writing
    Bye

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  2. Hi Carlos, i think that you are lucky to be born outside Santiago. This city is too noisy and fast. i have seen you playing soccer at college, u play very good. You should make a "mini concert" or "tocata" with your friens at university.
    Well take care!
    Bye!

    ResponderBorrar
  3. Her brother very interesting your life, but you should write:

    I come FROM another city.

    good luck brother.

    ResponderBorrar
  4. Hi, it's great that you are a musician. We share likes as playing video games playing football. it's awesome.
    ps: The names of universities or football clubs are writeen without quotes (" ")
    bye!

    ResponderBorrar
  5. Hi Carlos,

    Word Count: 250. Exact.

    Your writing is very expressive, but it needs some editing. I am sorry you are a Colo-colo fan.

    Please check the following:

    Please note that you write "Geography", with capital "G"., and you say "I am 21 (years old)...", not "I have..." Fabian Loch is right, you say "I come FROM another city"...
    I am a real (not "ly") ( no "fan of") football fan...
    ...I love This sport...
    ...ON (no "the") T.V.,

    IT is the most important and BEST (winning) TEAM (club) in Chile...

    But (NO "in") THESE (this) days IT is a bad team...

    If something happened I dislike is little time with my girlfriend.... (????)

    I can not see HER (NO "it")very often.

    Regards,

    JC


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